Remember your writing prompt from the beginning of the school year. Post your final drafts here. This means use what you have already typed or retype your prompt response in Microsoft Word. You will then copy and past your final draft as a comment on the blog (see below for details of a final draft). You will not be able to post Word Art and Pictures. Remember at the end of your submission to write your name (first only), teacher's name, and your reviewers name(s) then submit as an anonymous user .
What is a final draft?
A final draft should be a response that you have spent a little time on and had reviewed by others (at least 2 students/1 adult).
The Review
As a reviewer, a few things you should let the writer know:
(1) what you really liked
(2) what you were confused about
(3) what you want to know more about
The writer can use these types of comments to develop their piece (example: their prompt response).
IF I HAD A MILLON DOLLARS….
ReplyDeleteI WILL GO TO THE HOMELESS AND GIVE THE ABOUT 200 DOLLARS,
SO,THEY CAN GET A JOB , NEW LIFE,NEW FAMILY,AND MAKE MONEY ON THEIR OWN
ARIEL W.
MS.THOMES 5th
i meant to say this
DeleteI would make mats for the homeless, make everyone have their own choices at lunch, and make the world a better place.
by ariel winston
if i had a million dollars i would
ReplyDeletegive to the homeless so they can have a better life
donate to people that need it
share with my family
help people that need somewhere to live
that's what i would do with a million dollars
SALENIA MILLER
MRS.THOMAS 5TH GRADE
if i had a million dollars i would help the homeless people with a car,food,house then i would help my family with some money
ReplyDeleteMICHAEL HILL
Mrs.Fields 3 grade
If I had million dollors i would give the homeless my money and help them to get a job,clothes, and a house and espicially a car!!!
DeleteTerrell.Williams
Mrs.Fields
if i had a million dollars i would help homeless people get a job,car,house, and food and donate money to help charity and sick animals.
ReplyDeleteHiro Givens
Mrs.Fields3rd grade
If I a millon dollars I would help sick people and homeless and help my family. Braedon Miller Mrs.Fields3rd grade
ReplyDeleteBreadon, I will........
Delete- give the money
- and the homeless have food
- save the money the homeless will have a job
- have full of money buy a giant house
- buy a really really sweet looking car
- and the homeless will have insurence
- and make the homeless have children
- and get old the children are grown ups
- and the homeless will die and the children will pay for the caskets.THE END!
If i had a million dollar's i would help homeless people because i would give the communtie inything they want.But i will give my country money to put in bank and that's why i wold help the whole word
ReplyDeleteIf I had a millon dollars I would?
ReplyDelete.give money to charites
.feed the hungry
.give homes to the homeless
JOEY
MS.Vanpatter
Joey
MS.VanPatter
If I had a million dollars I would by stuff I want.Also give the rest of my money to homless. By Kaneil.Morrison
DeleteIf i had million dollors i would make a change, like
ReplyDelete- give the homeless money
- the homeless would have money and get a job
- then they can get their own money and get a house and get a car
-and they could have children
-and the children will grow up
END
hey, Terrell do you have million dollors to if you do I wood love you for you to come to the movies with me.
DeleteWell not really but, i have enough money to go to the movies
DeleteHi, everybody if i had million dollors i would give the homeless money and they can get their nown job and they can get their own money and have a house and have a car and have a great life
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hey, Arion do you really have a million dollors because give it to the homeless!
DeleteArion, I will give the homeless all of my money and everything and the worlds money
ReplyDeleteIf i had million dollars i would give the money to all the people in all the world. and they can go the the movies and see movies in 3D
ReplyDeleteI had a dream that I was rich and famous and I gave the homeless money and that was how I was famous and they called me the money giver and I had my own parade
ReplyDeleteIf I had a million dollars I would give $1,000 on charity and the rest for homeless.
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